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September 28, 2010

Age bar

55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.




She screamed “Come on! You can do it. Push!”.

“I am tired. Is this an age to do this?” he said.

“There’s no age bar dear. We can do it whenever we want. Show me all your strength.” She gave a mischievous smile.

“How is dada ji’s gym lesson going?” little Rohan asked his grandmother.



18 comments:

OP said...

liked it :)

Aneesh said...

funny :)

kannurboy said...

Nice ;)

Jil said...

Nice ;)

Uday said...

mischievous ;)

Sweta said...

Thanks Op, Aneesh, Jil :)

Shahid Mukadam a.k.a Shady West Side said...

naughty

Sweta said...

@Uday & Shahid: thanks.... :)

It's up to reader to take it in whatever way they want.. :)

Obsessivemom said...

Naughty and nice...

Thousif Raza said...

nice one... thx for putting a smile on my face :)

and hey i'm attending the indi meet :)... hope to see you there :)

Rajlakshmi said...

hehehe :) good one

Sweta said...

@Obsessivemon, Thousif Raza & rajlakshmi: Thanks for liking the post :)

miltan said...

good one.....

Mayank said...

Cool n sexy :) .. way to go!

Vee... said...

mischievous :D

Pythoroshan said...

hehe.. cute :)

s.H.a.S.h.I said...

thanks 4ur comment... interesting stuff .. i like it :)

sawan said...

:P liked the way you took it to the end :D

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