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October 19, 2010

Wonderful Morning

55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.





She opened her eyes, cool breeze greeted her a wonderful morning. She loved her soft bed, decorated with soft-toys. She never felt so happy in twelve years of her life.

One hard kick brought her back to reality. She found herself in messy storeroom “Go, start working you bitch. We don’t pay you to sleep.”







10 comments:

Reshma said...

sweet dreams, harsh reality...

Reshma said...

sweet dreams, harsh reality...

Aneesh said...

everyday dream :)
everyday reality :(

Sushant Shekhar said...

Awwww...tch tch..

Shri Ram Ayyangar said...

Stark reality.

Rajlakshmi said...

loved the contrast... well written

Sweta said...

Thnaks Reshma, Aneesh, Shushant, Sri Raan Sir and Lakshmi :)

Nasia said...

Awwww.. is it child labor that u r trying to put light on?

Mayank said...

I like the way you end the posts .. Completely unexpected. This one had the hint of sadness. In a few words, you brought into picture, those countless kids who dream of holding a book but instead end up holding brooms ........

jay said...

55 fiction .. looks like a kind of sms fiction .... good one.. even in such a short story u were able to deliver the message beautifully .. good work

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