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March 10, 2011

Fuss

55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.





How dare you enter my house?” She shouted fumingly and turned towards shelf but couldn’t find him once she turned back.

Where is he?”Anxiety was killing her.

She searched for him everywhere, but found him only on her favorite couch.

Her blood boiled “You dog, leave that place

SPRAY

And the cockroach was dead.


11 comments:

Reshma said...

Funny how a cockroach can psyche out people... check out http://www.squidoo.com/cockroaches-facts-and-myths for some fascinating facts on roaches.

Candy said...

lol gud one

Shilpa Garg said...

Nice 55er!! These roaches bring out such feelings in one and all especially we women!! :D

Sweta said...

@Reshma: It makes me go nuts always :)

@Candy: thanks for liking !

@Shilpa: very true Shilpa :D

Nasia said...

lol!
how do u know the cockroach is a he? ;-)

Sweta said...

@Nasia: All scary things in this world are "he" only :P

Quakeboy said...

That made me smile for second :)

Rajlakshmi said...

hehehe creepy cockroaches :P
nice fiction

Sweta said...

@Quakeboy: happy that my goal is achieved :)

@Rajlakshmi: Thanks :)

Ankush Samant said...

Superb!!

Rinaya said...

yeah pretty similar to mine.. i guess we both dread cockroaches! :P

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