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July 19, 2011

Day and Night


55 Fiction is a form of micro fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.


Bright sun and cool breeze took away her sleep. She was feeling different and she wanted him to know every bit of it. 

She ran towards the phone with excitement to hear his voice, until she realized, it was midnight and he was in deep sleep. Thanks to the different time zones they were in.



8 comments:

OP said...

good one .. looks like based on true story :)

Reshma said...

true story huh... I can almost see your excitement:)

Thousif Raza said...

nice...

take care and keep writing..........

Shilpa Garg said...

Good one!! :)
Real life story?? :)

Sweta said...

@Op: very much true OP ji :)

@Reshma: :D

Sweta said...

@Thusif: thanks :)

@Shilpa: yes m going through it now..

Saru Singhal said...

Beautiful, Lovely words and you can so relate to it!

Suree said...

hey its good ....

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