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April 27, 2013

I Ring the Bell



I put my hand there trying to feel,
Yes it’s a part of me which is yet to reveal.
Will it be a boy or it will be a girl,
Thinking of this makes me fear.

If it’s a girl, what will be her future?

Will she be free or she will always live in fear?

Oh my lord, look what is going on,

In this unsafe country I don’t want my girl to born.

Yes I wanted a girl cute, pretty and fun,
But after seeing things here I am stun.


Rapes, dowry, eve teasing, and molestation

To these problems I see only one solution.
Things will change only when men will change,
When his upbringing and mentality will change

When he will consider women equal and will respect her

Then only his mother, sister and daughter will also be safer.

Oh dear god please answer my prayer,

I ring the bell in front of you please make this country safer.



 

 

 

 

 

23 comments:

प्रवीण पाण्डेय said...

संवेदनात्मक,

विश्व जियेगा और सुरक्षित होगी बिटिया,
आधा तज कर, बोलो अब तक कौन जिया है,
मुखर नहीं यदि हो पाता है फिर भी आग्रह,
विध्वंसों से पूर्व सृष्टि ने मौन पिया है।

madhu bhardwaj said...

Very touching Poem.
Thanks.

Sweta said...

धन्यवाद प्रवीण जी :)

Sweta said...

Thanks Madhu

vinod kawar said...

good one...

vinod kawar said...

Good one....

cifar shayar said...

nice poem,artistic

Reshma said...

Beautiful prayer Sweta!! I hope it is answered soon :)

कालीपद प्रसाद said...

बहुत अच्छा भाव लिए रचना
डैश बोर्ड पर पाता हूँ आपकी रचना, अनुशरण कर ब्लॉग को
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Sweta said...

thanks Vinod and chifar :)

Sweta said...

thanks Reshma, I wish the same

Sweta said...

thanks Kalipad prasad ji :)

गिरधारी खंकरियाल said...

असामयिक कारण प्रकृति के विकास में बाधक बने हुये हैं।

Virendra Kumar Sharma said...

Mothers' womb childs'tomb ,no more no more .All souls are equal .There is no gender bias from Gods' side .It is the man stupid men in vices who discriminate .

Sweta said...

Very well said Virendra !!

shyam gupta said...


good poem...

"Things will change only when men will change,"

ok......

----but who will change the man for a change .....the mother ...

Saru Singhal said...

Now, we are worried for our kids even before they are born, what a tragedy and shame for the country. Heart wrenching poem.

Sweta said...

@shyam gupta: very true, mother is the first teacher to the kid. she can only teach her to respect women

Sweta said...

@Virendra: very well said

CYNOSURE said...

I'm speechless...very well composed... :)

Amrita Singh said...

Very Very Very nice poem sir..

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Sweta said...

Thanks CYNOSURE

Gv Sparx said...

Beautiful poem. Conveys the message in an apt way. It depicts the pain a lot of mothers in this country go through.

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